ERIC RED AND THE SECOND SCREENPLAY
Following Gibson's departure, Renny Harlin recommended Eric Red, a screenwriter he had met at a film festival some months before. Hill and Giler had resigned themselves to hire a big name screenwriter, and Red seemed a likely candidate for the position. By age twenty-eight, the young writer had already distinguished himself in the Hollywood community by turning marginal material, like THE HITCHER (1986), NEAR DARK (1987) and BLUE STEEL (1988), into popular box office hits. He was hard at work on the screen story for COHEN & TATE (19 ), and preparing for his directoral debut on BODY PARTS (1991), when the partners at Brandywine approached him with ALIEN 3. "The basic problem when I was involved, for five weeks, was they didn't know what they really wanted," Red recalled sometime later. "They went through a real waste of talent because of that. Another major problem was they didn't want Sigourney [Weaver] back, so I had to go through a whole series of new characters . . ." * * * * * Eric Red's screenplay begins, much like Gibson's, in deep space with the Sulaco. Due to a malfunction in the on-board navigational circuitry, the former troop carrier has drifted aimlessly in space for many years. The ship is intercepted by a small shuttlecraft, and searched by five Special Forces Green Berets and their captain, Sam Smith. They find the hypersleep chambers, which once held Ripley, Newt, Hicks and Bishop, have been smashed open, and alien eggs now reside in each. Upon closer examination, they find a sticky-like substance and cocoons hanging from the ceiling to the floor. Suddenly, an alien warrior drops down upon the soldiers. They blast away at the creature with their superior weapons, but the Green Berets are ill-matched, and are nearly all wiped out. Mysteriously returned back to its original course, the Sulaco reaches its destination, North Star--a space station and farming outpost populated mostly by redneck farmers. Several weeks pass, while Sam Smith, the only survivor of the massacre, recuperates at his parents' farmhouse on the surface of the orbiting station. (Not only does Sam learns that all his men are dead but he also discovers, much to his dismay, that one arm and leg have been replaced with mechanical parts.) Tired of resting, he decides to accompany his father, General John Smith, to the base. Along the way, several farmers question John about the huge military build-up in personnel and armored vehicles, and Sam notices that the families of his men have mysteriously vanished. Fifty stories below the golden wheat fields and the pastoral farm-like settings, the "Company," in conjunction with the military, has constructed a massive complex. Bio-medical laboratories, conference rooms, troop training centers, docking bays for spaceships, fifty-story tall air and water tanks, all enclosed within huge glass windows, make up the mile in diameter complex. When Sam asks his father about the Sulaco, he is told that the ship (now stored in one of the docking bays) is completely off limits to all but authorized personnel. General Smith and his son are greeted by Sergeant Chong, the station's security chief, who informs them that Sam is wanted by "Company" officials. In the debriefing room, Dr. Alice Rand, Colonel Harold Sinclair, and three representatives from the Bio-weapons Division question him about his skirmish aboard the Sulaco. Sam doesn't remember much about it, having suffered a temporary memory loss, other than losing his men. Rand seems pleased that he has no memory of the alien creatures. Less than an hour later, Sam and his father are confronted by some of the redneck farmers. Briggs and Agar remind them that North Star is not a military station but a civilian operation under the control of the Colonial Administration Authority. The military cannot simply impose martial law to take their livestock. Willie Ray, another terra-farmer, accuses them of secret radiation experiments. John feigns ignorance but promises to look into their complaints. Later that night on their drive home, the two Smiths notice several armed squads of soldiers loading pigs, chickens and cattle onto trucks under the cover of darkness. Far too bothered by what he has seen to sleep, Sam wakes his father in the middle of the night, and confronts him about what has happened. He "remembers" parts of his battle with an alien, but he cannot seem to grasp the whole. John first dismisses his son's memories of his struggle aboard the Sulaco as a nightmare, then tells him the truth. The "Company" might have ordered the young man lobotomized if he remembered too much of what had happened aboard the ship. They plan to develop the alien as a weapon. Sam has to see for himself, and penetrates the security of Section "C," where the former troop transport is housed, to discover a scene from hell. They have used the farmers' livestock to create pig-aliens, cattle-aliens, chicken-aliens, dog-aliens, etc. Apparently, the alien parasite gestates inside a living organism, and then takes on the physical attributes or characteristics of that organism when it finally emerges. Sam is sickened by what he has seen, and scrambles down an airduct to avoid becoming the alien's next victim. Sam crawls past the Science Division, and overhears a lecture, which confirms most of his suspicions. Dr. Rand, the leading authority in bio-weapons research, tells a group composed of earth scientists, technicians, "Company" officials, and military leaders (including General Smith) that the alien is "the soldier of the future." She has managed to isolate the alien's DNA cells, and learned that those cells "attack and assimilate the cells of whatever it encounters." "Imagine," she intones, "a living, organic jet fighter or alien tank." Rand then instructs members of her research team to bring in an alien warrior whose arms and legs are pinned in a hydraulic clamp. "Ladies and gentleman," the doctor continues, "a living war machine, utterly violent and utterly effective. I wouldn't want to be you if you were Russians and we released an army of these things by airdrop on Moscow." Alice Rand releases the creature from its clamps, claiming to have mastered its control. But when her back is turned, the alien warrior attacks, and tears her apart. It then begins ripping human after human limb-from-limb. Reporting immediately to the duty officer on deck, the young captain takes command of a small squad of Special Forces Green Berets, and charges into the room to rescue his father. On his way to save the other survivors, though, his men are attacked by the army of alien warriors developed and perfected by the "Company." (These monsters include the pig-aliens, chicken-aliens and cattle-aliens Sam discovered earlier.) His specially-trained soldiers fight nobly against the horde of aliens, but they are simply ill-matched. Smith manages to slip away during the battle to help his father and some other key figures to safety, then realizes there's nothing he can do to stop the slaughterfest. Sam becomes instantly enraged, recalling what those monsters did to his men aboard the Sulaco, and curses them all (including General Smith) for allowing such madness to happen in the first place. Above, on the surface of North Star, the terra-farmers have felt the first tremors of an earthquake. Briggs and the others know that the military has been up to something no good, and begin arming themselves with pitchforks, hoes, shovels, and shotguns. They plan to finally get even just as soon as day-break arrives. With their path to the surface cut off, Sam and his father, accompanied by thirty Green Berets, climb into spacesuits, and head through the emergency escape-hatch into space. (They plan to climb around the dome, and enter North Star from above.) They are followed into space by a horde of alien warriors. Meanwhile, the aliens have penetrated the surface, and are striking innocent farmers in their wheat fields, at the local 7-11 store, and at the golden arches of MacDonalds. By the time Sam Smith and his father arrive with reinforcements, the redneck farmers are already embroiled in a massive battle at the town's meeting hall. Against the backdrop of smalltown Americana of Woolworths and hardware stores, hundreds of alien warriors attack. Scuttling, staggering, crawling down the street, the creatures appear totally invincible. But the terrified townsfolk mount a defensive line which temporarily drives the aliens back. During the lull in battle, Sam rescues his mother and siblings from their farmhouse, and tries to place them safely aboard a space shuttle with the other women and children. But they refuse. The terra-farmers subsequently launch the shuttle, without them, hoping that the ship's distress beacon will summon a rescue ship for the rest of them. The remaining soldiers and redneck farmers then barricade themselves in the town's meeting hall, and await the next wave. John Smith suddenly starts to act funny, confessing to his wife and children that he volunteered to test a new alien strain. But before Sam can get to him, the General suddenly doubles over at the waist and begins convulsing. He then grasps at his chest and an alien creature, more deadly than before, emerges. Sam, who has never seen this happen before, panics, destroying the barricade instead of his father. Other hybrid aliens, notably a rooster-alien and a mosquito-alien, swarm through the opening, and attack without mercy. Sam and his family race to the safety of a second space shuttle (which suddenly appears in the script without prior mention), and blast off right through the dome. The explosive decompression causes the space station to dissolve, and reform as a tremendous alien thing--a living biomechanoid space blob, ten miles across, with octopus-like tentacles formed from the beams and girders of the station. Captain Smith tries to pilot their shuttle away from the creature, but it simply reaches out and grabs the tiny craft. Fearing a hull-breach, the Smith family climb into spacesuits. Sam then remembers the ship carries nuclear weapons, and sets the payload to explode once they have gotten away. Mere heartbeats later, Sam and the others watch North Star's destruction at a safe distance. The alien menace has hopefully, once and for all, been destroyed! They continue to float in deep space, and are eventually rescued by the other shuttle . . . * * * * * Eric Red's "five-week job," first intended to coax more development money out of Twentieth Century-Fox, turned into a two-month ordeal. When he finally delivered his completed manuscript on February 7, 1989, no one seemed to like the script, despite the author's introduction of a new kind of alien. "In the third film, you needed a new alien, so I suggested doing genetic experiments with one of them," Red defended his screenplay. "[Hill and Giler] had no story or treatment or any real plan for the picture. They were very disorganized and irresponsible." Renny Harlin would have been the first to agree with Red, but after reading Red's uninspired script, the Finnish director simply asked to be released from his contract. Fox offered him THE ADVENTURES OF FORD FAIRLANE and DIE-HARD 2 instead. Sigourney Weaver also read the script, and concurred with David Giler's appraisal that "it was a real disaster, absolutely dreadful." Hill seemed to like the gene-splicing idea but little else. Eric Red was paid for his efforts, then dismissed from the project. The partners at Brandywine were no closer to making ALIEN 3 than before, and now they were short a director.
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